
It occurred to me that North Korea is probably the only country in the world where the news wouldn't be published and I thought that would be an interesting situation for British Consulate employees to find themselves in. I believe our government would try to inform all employees so they would be some of the few people in the know. There is a curfew in many parts of North Korea I understand so as relatively minor employees in their own home in the middle of the night, they would be stuck.
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Michael van Koetsveld (Tuesday, 23 July 2019 19:10)
I liked the premise and the location worked but I felt that there was a little too much repetition. If you do another edit you could probably save half a minute and make it even punchier. Perhaps also look at your sound levels - the bedding was almost louder than the voices. I did like the tv content being NOTHING to do with the impact - great idea. I hope you will receive these comments in the manner in which they are intended - to make it the best it can be.