'Assemble Avenger' by Mark Renshaw

As a meteor heads towards Earth, an average guy facing the loss of everything he holds dear, decides to step up and become the hero we all need.

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Comments: 3
  • #3

    Anthony Barclay (Monday, 11 February 2019 19:28)

    I like this idea: it doesn't matter that our final actions are fruitless, we'll rage at the dying of the light, regardless. I can understand why others may have suggested your hero rides a scooter rather than a powerful motorbike because it doesn't immediately suit his character, but the fact that this average joe happens to have a huge machine at his disposal is a nice touch, I feel. If he's into super heroes then it's not out of the realm of possibility that he's been riding his bike to fulfill his superhero desires- speed, power, etc, average though he may be.

  • #2

    Tom J Hingley (Friday, 08 February 2019 15:30)

    Hi Mark
    Like this idea. Why not make it more Mr Bean/Johnny English - takes macho pose in front of mirror, scooter rather than powerful motorbike, he faces up to the cool dudes on the beach as if to take them on, girls impressed, "You shall not advance!" declaration to the oncoming storm wave with smug deluded satisfaction, then "Oh dear." final realisation etc Such fun! Cheers Tom

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    Ricardo Bravo (Tuesday, 05 February 2019 10:15)

    The title nailed it for me and the story delivered. Very well done.
    My only suggestion, don't make Mismatch Man (aka Average Guy) drive a powerful motorcycle. He would not be able to handle it in a million years. Have him ride a scooter instead, whizzing through town at 60MPH.
    Cheers