Jo Raggett (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 12:23)

Fabulous and funny! I can just imagine this actually happening!

Maybe have them freeze before the impact happens - so even if the freezer would have protected them, their stupidity at leaving it switched on would kill them anyway!

Lorenzo Colonna (Tuesday, 19 February 2019 11:36)

Hi Adam. I like the story and the tone. :) I was wondering if you need the supermarket boss; he doesn't add too much to the story and you could use those lines to show us a bit more of the friendship between Bradley and Rick.