An old man won't leave his memories behind.
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Michael van Koetsveld (Wednesday, 08 May 2019 14:10)
Only bit I thought might be a bit hard to connect is that the photo is of Angie when the fleeting glimpse occurs.
Stephanie (Tuesday, 19 March 2019 23:26)
Thanks so much for your feedback. Angie doesn’t need to be a Sales Assistant if it makes it confusing? I just wanted to make it clear that there was a reason she was wearing a white tunic. Not
because she’s a care worker. Maybe I can do it another way? Stephanie
Michelle (Sunday, 17 March 2019 01:06)
Stephanie, I love this script, the circular dialogue, it's full of emotion and excellent visuals. My only comment would have been that possibly the last line of Joe's dialogue wasn't needed as the
script was very clear, but that's a miniscule note. When you reveal that Angie isn't a care nurse, but in fact a sales assistant, I had to double back, as I thought perhaps the location had changed,
hence that last line.. 'You think I'm crazy or something?' .. it probably would have worked either way :)