I admit I was intrigued by the title and had to read it! Really like this, and can imagine something like this actually happening in some of the offices I've worked in.
- Jennifer
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Michael van Koetsveld(Wednesday, 15 May 2019 08:50)
Hi Catherine,
A really fun script, agree with Carmen, but like that this could be filmed in any office out of hours with minimum set dressing and just a couple of set-ups. A producer's dream.
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Carmen Radtke(Thursday, 21 March 2019 17:48)
I like this idea! Just cut out “this is the scene we see”. Nice mix of seedy and emotional. Although “your best performance yet” doesn’t sound like something he’d say to a woman in the same position
as he is. Maybe a kind of work joke?
JK Murphy (Wednesday, 22 May 2019 15:51)
I admit I was intrigued by the title and had to read it! Really like this, and can imagine something like this actually happening in some of the offices I've worked in.
- Jennifer
Michael van Koetsveld (Wednesday, 15 May 2019 08:50)
Hi Catherine,
A really fun script, agree with Carmen, but like that this could be filmed in any office out of hours with minimum set dressing and just a couple of set-ups. A producer's dream.
Carmen Radtke (Thursday, 21 March 2019 17:48)
I like this idea! Just cut out “this is the scene we see”. Nice mix of seedy and emotional. Although “your best performance yet” doesn’t sound like something he’d say to a woman in the same position as he is. Maybe a kind of work joke?