'To death we face together' by Kooi Glendinning

 

A middle age Biomedical scientist manages to please her patient as well as living up to her wedding oath.
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'To death we face together' by Kooi Glendinning
A middle age Biomedical scientist manages to please her patient as well as living up to her wedding oath.
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    Michael van Koetsveld (Wednesday, 15 May 2019 02:03)

    Hi Kooi,

    Nice temprament to both plotlines.

    One quibble, when reading, I was confused by the line "She takes the bag from Chu." since, at that time, you are talking about Chu. I think it is Rosie's bag, as mentioned later. so I really don't think you need to mention it twice. Save yourself some lines and tighten this up a bit and it will be better for it.