'Feast' by Sally Brockway

A slimming club turns into an all you can eat buffet.

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    Emma (Friday, 12 July 2019 12:14)

    Hi Sally,
    As a member of a slimming club myself, I thought this was such a brilliant idea! You could take it one step further with the gorging of food - and do an almost abstract piece showing how much devouring food is a total pleasure that these people have been denying themselves. Maybe using slo mo in certain sections. I think there is more humour to be gained from this piece, maybe some dialogue where they discuss exactly what they're going to eat first and what they will end on. I also think the characters could be developed more, maybe just start from entering the church hall to give yourself more time.