'Forgiven' by Steve Sasaki LATEST DRAFT

How valuable is forgiveness when the world is ending?

'Forgiven' by Steve Sasaki
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    Christopher Dane (Sunday, 02 June 2019 11:19)

    Not convinced that someone would spend their last time on this earth coming up with an elaborate deceit like this... why not just kill her? Also when it says "she leaves" at the end, we assume she's left and therefore the ending doesn't make sense... between that and him leaving he would have had to get the lead, catch her, string her up, pack his bags... it's just to big a leap for me, sorry.

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    Michael van Koetsveld (Friday, 26 April 2019 22:38)

    OOH, you had me.

    Disturbing and unsettling.

    Not sure how I would get that last piece to look right, but I'm sure someone out there could.

    Good Luck.