A shy guy who has never been with a woman must find the courage to ask her dream girl out. There's a problem: he's speech impaired.
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Mark Walker (Sunday, 17 March 2019 17:25)
Loved this short Lorenzo - pretty much sums up my dating adventures as a younger man, just without the meteor! Very much bitter-sweet!
Mark Renshaw (Tuesday, 19 March 2019 09:58)
A lovely story made more powerful by the absence of dialogue. At first I thought this was just to make a point but the twist at the end is a great twist and makes it all that sweeter. Great job,
Lorenzo Colonna (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 07:45)
Mark & Mark: thanks for your comments. :)
Jo Raggett (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 12:18)
Beautiful story! Loved it.
Lorenzo Colonna (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 17:40)
Thanks Jo. :)
Jo Peios (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 18:02)
Great ending – very touching and heartfelt.
Lorenzo Colonna (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 21:25)
Michael van Koetsveld (Wednesday, 01 May 2019 21:32)
Beautiful. Very makeable and fun for the editor too.
Hope you make it.
Lorenzo Colonna (Tuesday, 14 May 2019 15:28)
Hey Michael. Thank you so much for your kind words. I hope that too. ;)