'Gesture' by Lorenzo Colonna

A shy guy who has never been with a woman must find the courage to ask her dream girl out. There's a problem: he's speech impaired.

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Comments: 9
  • #1

    Mark Walker (Sunday, 17 March 2019 17:25)

    Loved this short Lorenzo - pretty much sums up my dating adventures as a younger man, just without the meteor! Very much bitter-sweet!

  • #2

    Mark Renshaw (Tuesday, 19 March 2019 09:58)

    A lovely story made more powerful by the absence of dialogue. At first I thought this was just to make a point but the twist at the end is a great twist and makes it all that sweeter. Great job, Lorenzo.

  • #3

    Lorenzo Colonna (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 07:45)

    Mark & Mark: thanks for your comments. :)

  • #4

    Jo Raggett (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 12:18)

    Beautiful story! Loved it.

  • #5

    Lorenzo Colonna (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 17:40)

    Thanks Jo. :)

  • #6

    Jo Peios (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 18:02)

    Great ending – very touching and heartfelt.

  • #7

    Lorenzo Colonna (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 21:25)

    Thanks!

  • #8

    Michael van Koetsveld (Wednesday, 01 May 2019 21:32)

    Beautiful. Very makeable and fun for the editor too.

    Hope you make it.

  • #9

    Lorenzo Colonna (Tuesday, 14 May 2019 15:28)

    Hey Michael. Thank you so much for your kind words. I hope that too. ;)