A daughter finally gets the love she craves.
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Michael van Koetsveld (Wednesday, 01 May 2019 00:55)
Emma Pullar (Monday, 25 March 2019)
Thank you for the feedback Mark and Mark.
Mark Walker, it is funny you should say that because I had to cut an entire page (for some reason, I thought it was a three page limit, d'oh) and so the father was there. Sadly, I could not manage to
to keep him around with only two pages to work with.
Mark Walker (Thursday, 21 March 2019 07:42)
Ha, after the bittersweet tones of Forever Young, here is the twisted Emma back to shock us! ;-) Again, another nice, tight little story - and something I can imagine happening A LOT if this
situation would ever arise in real life - people taking the opportunity to turn the tables on their bullies and oppressors.
The only thing I could think of would be to have a father figure in there who is also bullied and have them bond at the end when Jess does the thing he has always wanted to do, but has been
But you also only have two pages, so that's just my random thoughts spewing out onto the page! :-)
Mark Renshaw (Wednesday, 20 March 2019 10:00)
Very powerful, shocking - certainly different and in a good way. Great job.