A man raises a glass to the news he doesn’t believe.
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Michael van Koetsveld (Friday, 26 April 2019 23:14)
Great scene, very makeable, but I agree with Paul that the initial intrigue and direction got a bit lost.
Hope to see another version where you keep on that tack.
Paul (Thursday, 18 April 2019)
I was lured into this by your blog post...
I have to say it was disappointing.
It starts off as a nod to 'Fake News', which is great, a very valid idea...but it doesn't go along with that idea, it somehow ends up about the barman having a job interview and feels a millions
miles away from what was originally hinted at.
Also, the character is interesting but feels out of place in this pub. It seems to be an 'Old Man' pub; he feels like he should be running a pop-up shop in Camden.
Lose the interview bit, stick to the fake news and expand that story.