An elderly couple re-enact the special moment only one of them can remember.
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Eileen Wilson (Wednesday, 13 February 2019 21:29)
A sweet wee script, one location and two cast, so budget friendly too.
Most scripts I read are INT. APARTMENT, BEDROOM - DAY for example, with a hyphen but I guess it's personal preference.
I'd use present tense 'stares at his face', as 'he is shaved'.
Rather than 'walk slowly', how about 'teeter', saves a run on line.
I like the take on dementia/alzheimers and the humility, nice.
Hope that helps, Eileen
Mark Renshaw (Friday, 22 March 2019 12:33)
Sweet and simple. I liked it.