Rhonda confronts her fortune teller. Zelda has some explaining to do.
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Rick Limentani (Thursday, 17 January 2019 09:16)
Ben, good stuff. Like this much more than the last word one. It's dark but fits really well. Great script.
Very few suggestions to improve this:
1) Might be interesting to know what Zelda was doing in her caravan alone with her last few moments.
2) Not sure naming the ball Agatha will be understood by an audience that doesn't get to read the action paras.
3) Spotted a typo: evovling.