Rhonda's Destiny by Ben Marshall

Rhonda confronts her fortune teller. Zelda has some explaining to do.

Rhonda's Destiny by Ben Marshall
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Comments: 4
  • #4

    Michael van Koetsveld (Friday, 26 April 2019 23:06)

    It made me smile, nice and sleazy.

    I hope to see this one sometime.

    It stands alone really well as a short script.

  • #3

    Kooi Glendinning (Thursday, 14 February 2019 12:25)

    I like the script. It is original and sad. I love Zelda’s interpretion of Paris and the two girls but not sure about Agatha being the crystal ball.

  • #2

    catherine williams (Wednesday, 30 January 2019 13:31)

    Love this script... Warm, poignant and grubby! There are a few typos so it'd be worth giving it a close going over. And agree with comment above re Agatha. Really original and colourful tho!

  • #1

    Rick Limentani (Thursday, 17 January 2019 09:16)

    Ben, good stuff. Like this much more than the last word one. It's dark but fits really well. Great script.

    Very few suggestions to improve this:
    1) Might be interesting to know what Zelda was doing in her caravan alone with her last few moments.
    2) Not sure naming the ball Agatha will be understood by an audience that doesn't get to read the action paras.
    3) Spotted a typo: evovling.

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