Hi Carmen
Thanks for taking the time to read. I'm glad Candy came across as I'd hoped.
Cheers
Lee
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Carmen Radtke(Tuesday, 29 January 2019 09:26)
Lots of intrigue and interesting characters. This would probably work even better if you had the room to expand. As it is, there are so many questions unanswered. Why did she steal the baby? Why did
she keep track of the family she snatched the baby from? What did the mother do? Little Candy is a delight.
Lee Betteridge (Thursday, 07 February 2019 13:19)
Hi Carmen
Thanks for taking the time to read. I'm glad Candy came across as I'd hoped.
Cheers
Lee
Carmen Radtke (Tuesday, 29 January 2019 09:26)
Lots of intrigue and interesting characters. This would probably work even better if you had the room to expand. As it is, there are so many questions unanswered. Why did she steal the baby? Why did she keep track of the family she snatched the baby from? What did the mother do? Little Candy is a delight.