I loved this script. The suspense! There were so many layers to this story. Who killed Mr Tillman? The ending! Was she already dead and she saw herself like a ghost or was it a premonition?
You amazingly managed to pack so much in 2 pages. I have nothing to add apart from maybe her mom asked who she was when she came into her room and her parents were waltzing away. Go write the feature
thriller!
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Kooi (Thursday, 18 April 2019 14:54)
I loved this script. The suspense! There were so many layers to this story. Who killed Mr Tillman? The ending! Was she already dead and she saw herself like a ghost or was it a premonition?
You amazingly managed to pack so much in 2 pages. I have nothing to add apart from maybe her mom asked who she was when she came into her room and her parents were waltzing away. Go write the feature thriller!