'Tell me You'll Miss Me' by John Bale

Sarah wouldn't dream of letting anything stop her from spending her final hours on earth with her widowed mother... would she?

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  • #1

    Kooi (Thursday, 18 April 2019 14:54)

    I loved this script. The suspense! There were so many layers to this story. Who killed Mr Tillman? The ending! Was she already dead and she saw herself like a ghost or was it a premonition?
    You amazingly managed to pack so much in 2 pages. I have nothing to add apart from maybe her mom asked who she was when she came into her room and her parents were waltzing away. Go write the feature thriller!