Sally Womersley (Wednesday, 29 May 2019 19:42)

Hi Valerie,

Thank you so much for your comments.

Valerie O’Doherty (Tuesday, 28 May 2019 22:53)

Very realistic, well done.
I liked it, even though it was a bit predictive.
A nice way to go...and at the end he though he saw her raise her head - and maybe she did. Lovely.

Michael van Koetsveld (Tuesday, 30 April 2019 21:34)

Great work, good luck with casting, I hope it gets made.

Sally Womersley (Monday, 29 April 2019 16:06)

Hi Michael

Thanks for the feedback. I take on board what you've said and have submitted a redraft, bringing the playing ages down from 80 to late 60's for George and him appearing in the photo in his late 40's. Just need a violinist now.

Greatly appreciate you taking time to read my script.
Best wishes
Sally

Michael van Koetsveld (Friday, 26 April 2019 22:15)

I like the story but have a problem with the casting of an 80-year-old violinist who can play well enough to do this justice. I'm sure they're out there but it might be a tricky one to cast.

I do think that the ages of the two could be adjusted down a decade or two and still create a valid piece.

Well done.