If she wants to be with the man she loves at the end of the world, Annette must keep him from his family.
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Mark Renshaw (Friday, 22 March 2019 11:54)
It needs a bit of tweaking to bring it up to industry standards with some of the formatting but that aside it reads fine. The old infidelity ploy. I could see a lot of that playing out if such an
event was about to occur.
Mark Walker (Sunday, 17 March 2019 18:08)
Hi Richard - nicely done - I can see this being a situation that would arise more than once in such an event! I like that the view from the window clues the audience into the deception. I wonder if
you could show more agonising over ignoring her lover's phone....but then again, maybe she is not that compassionate... nice idea!