'Where Are You?' by Richard Osborne LATEST DRAFT

If she wants to be with the man she loves at the end of the world, Annette must keep him from his family.

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  • #3

    Michael van Koetsveld (Tuesday, 30 April 2019 21:25)

    We know that this is going to be made! I hope that the good bits from the previous version might creep into a final draft before the shoot.

    Looking forward to it.

  • #2

    Mark Renshaw (Friday, 22 March 2019 11:54)

    It needs a bit of tweaking to bring it up to industry standards with some of the formatting but that aside it reads fine. The old infidelity ploy. I could see a lot of that playing out if such an event was about to occur.

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    Mark Walker (Sunday, 17 March 2019 18:08)

    Hi Richard - nicely done - I can see this being a situation that would arise more than once in such an event! I like that the view from the window clues the audience into the deception. I wonder if you could show more agonising over ignoring her lover's phone....but then again, maybe she is not that compassionate... nice idea!


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