J (Thursday, 17 May 2018 19:11)
Great imagery. Would really benefit from making clearer the 'planetary destruction' element within the eye otherwise the heart of the tension is lost. Agree, tweaking needed for legibility on text.
Also, 50 stories, 1 outcome is nice but it's really important that if that is the only text to give context to the project, the imagery must work harder to convey the narrative.
Kerry (Wednesday, 02 May 2018 14:45)
Needs a little tweaking to make the text more readable, but I like the imagery, I like "50 Stories 1 Outcome"...